Yesterday I attended an OCA Thames Valley meeting. It was a very worthwhile event. Sharon Boothroyd, my tutor, was there providing help and advice. The meeting largely concentrated on reviewing work by the students present – a form of critique. This is extremely useful and motivational as it can be very lonely on a distance learning course and this form of interaction with other students is invaluable.
Eddie Lerpiniere showed some of his recent portraiture which is exploring the relationships within his family – Eddy has three sons. John Umney showed some of his recent work in which he is working with image and text to create open narratives. Sharon showed work from two series including They all say please in which she takes prayer cards posted onto the internet and constructs images showing her interpretations of the prayers. John and Sharon’s work with image and text is of particular relevance to my Lifting the Curtain project. We share common concerns about how to present the image and text and so on.
I had the opportunity to present my ideas on presentation for Lifting the Curtain. I gained valuable feedback.
- the larger images were perceived as much more impactful and the way to go – I should present 4-6 images in 60×80 cm format for assessment, along with A2 sized copies of all images.
- presenting the text as a framed document or on a sheet on a clipboard alongside the image were seen as good ways to present the text and avoid it becoming swamped by the large colourful image – the size of the text frame and font do not need to be too large – I should remember that the source for the material is a book. An A5 sized sheet floating mounted in 10×8 inch frame is probably large enough as a companion text frame for the 60×80 cm images. I need to experiment with different forms and sizes when I construct my mock up — see below.
- Framing the images full bleed and back mounted in a spacer frame would enable me to maximise image size for a particular frame size and is a more contemporary presentation – emphasising the modernity of the images
- My plan to produce a mock up of a gallery installation in my home and rephotograph it for assessment was seen to be a good idea.
- The book might more appropriately be presented without a brightly coloured dust cover. A cloth cover with silver or gold foil blocking would work very well. This would feel more like an old book – referencing Booth’s book. I will probably make two copies of the book in this form for assessment – it will be more expensive to have the books foil blocked.
- The photo paper version of the book was generally seen as much more impactful than the matt paper version – the photographs in the latter were very flat.
- The image of the Royal London Hospital does not seem to fit well in the series. The frontal symmetrical viewpoint and the seemingly daylight conditions (actually it was made early in the morning after sunrise) seem out of place – I will think again about whether to include this image.
- I really liked the paper that John Umney used for the images he showed. Canson Baryta Photographique. I plan to experiment with this paper for my assessment printing.
Catherine
November 23, 2014
I was sorry to have missed it Keith and would like to have seen the book. Obviously a very good session for all.
Keith Greenough
November 23, 2014
yes it was a good day…a shame you couldn’t be there….babysitting I understand…
jsumb
November 23, 2014
Great to see the work almost there Keith, really strong and beautiful work. Inspirational
Catherine
November 23, 2014
Yes – although I sometimes wonder whose babysitting who as we’re now getting lectures about the cost of things – as in “Why has Grandad got so many fish in the tank? You only need two!”.
jsumb
November 23, 2014
We missed you!
Another meeting as strong as the last and very much in the same vein. Perhaps needed more work from the attendees, hope Eddy makes that clear for the next meeting.
Vicki M
November 23, 2014
I’ll try and have some work! Maybe photographic—or maybe my submission for TAOP as will have had feedback by then, and possibly have materials returned?
Carol Street
November 23, 2014
I’ll try and bring some work along – may well be in the early stages of assignment three by then. I may well have TAOP back from assessment too.
Vicki M
November 23, 2014
I’ve only just got up—and you’ve already posted your review! Two questions I meant to ask yesterday—maybe you can help. What is conceptual photography? And what is humanist photography? That last one never came up yesterday in discussions—but it’s been at the back of my mind of a while.
Thoroughly enjoyed the day—pity I had to leave early—but I made it home before nightfall.
Keith Greenough
November 23, 2014
hi Vicki….yes am up early usually. Conceptual Photography….lots of different definitions I think. For me it is where an important component of the work is an underlying idea, which underpins the work. For ‘Lifting the Curtain’ the idea is to revisit places mentioned in Booth’s original survey, to photograph these places at night/early morning with no people around, and to juxtapose an historic text and the image. I could have documented East London today by simply capturing a personal response to the place — a more intuitive, less structured approach.
As for humanist photography, again probably many different interpretations….. At its heart humanist photography emphasises and values people and suggests that we are all the same under the skin. In photography there is an undercurrent which is the idea of a universal visual language which characterises human nature and the human condition. This idea was at the heart of Steichen’s historic post second world war exhibition ‘Family of Man’. This exhibition has been much criticised as glossing over the reality of racial, sexual, and political repression throughout the world. Many also regard it as part of the American propaganda machine. Barthes comments on the ‘Family of Man’ are worth a read…see
Click to access familyman.pdf
Vicki M
November 23, 2014
Thanks Keith—explanations are clear—and that helps me. Have bookmarked the Barthes reading from Mythologies too—something else to read!
Carol Street
November 23, 2014
Another late riser here – sitting with a coffee catching up with all things photographical. Nice to see you yesterday Keith and great to see your book and prints first-hand – nice to see your proposed cloth cover on here. Loved the book and thought your prints, in particular the A1 were stunning – really helpful to see what can be achieved with the right skills.
Keith Greenough
November 23, 2014
Thanks Carol…yet to find out how much it would cost to have the book fold blocked….